Using the Document Camera in a Writers' Circle to critique the Life of a Mountain Man Paragraph
The kids are getting really good at taking in thoughts and feedback from classmates about their work. Today, using the criteria list to guide the comments, compliments, or questions, the writers listened to help make their paragraph more clear or organized.
Here, Brooklyn is listening to Kylor and adding or changing her rough draft. Other students listen and work to make changes as examples are up on the SmatBoard.
Interactions with this content strengthen and reinforce the importance of cooperation and how we learn together.